I'm assuming the character is going to be developed a little more? Since right now the body is a little awkward. It looks very interesting though and I definitely want to see where this goes.
The character is a little awkward right now, but I think that's mostly timing issues. To me, it seems that if he fell a little faster and maybe at a different angle,(?), then he wont look as awkward. Good work so far, though, and that spinning record is nice!
I think the characters head needs to be brought the first layer, if you have that round circle over the body his head will look more like it is hanging over his shoulders and will solve your awkward problem. I think you should have the record come in sooner to have a few more rotations on the broken record before he falls because you don't pick up that is what happens right away but after you watch it a couple of times. great start cant wait to see what he falls into.
Looks good. Maybe think about animating the record player arm to bring the needle down on or pulling it off the record. The more little things you can animate the less static it will feel.
I really like this idea and the record player looks awesome. However the timing is off and the puppet movement looks a little strange. Maybe make his movements a little bit more deliberate
My thoughts are about the same as everyone else, the movement of the record is down but the movement of the figure is a bit off and could use a little work.
I'm interested to see where you take this. Are you still doing the daily routine with the skipping record in the background?
ReplyDeleteI'm assuming the character is going to be developed a little more? Since right now the body is a little awkward. It looks very interesting though and I definitely want to see where this goes.
ReplyDeleteThe character is a little awkward right now, but I think that's mostly timing issues. To me, it seems that if he fell a little faster and maybe at a different angle,(?), then he wont look as awkward. Good work so far, though, and that spinning record is nice!
ReplyDeleteLooks great right now, I like the style you settled on but just improve the guys movement.
ReplyDeleteI think the characters head needs to be brought the first layer, if you have that round circle over the body his head will look more like it is hanging over his shoulders and will solve your awkward problem. I think you should have the record come in sooner to have a few more rotations on the broken record before he falls because you don't pick up that is what happens right away but after you watch it a couple of times. great start cant wait to see what he falls into.
ReplyDeleteLooks good. Maybe think about animating the record player arm to bring the needle down on or pulling it off the record. The more little things you can animate the less static it will feel.
ReplyDeleteI really like this idea and the record player looks awesome. However the timing is off and the puppet movement looks a little strange. Maybe make his movements a little bit more deliberate
ReplyDeleteMy big suggestions have already been said so I'll just say keep it up, and consider adding pins at the knees and elbows for more natural movement.
ReplyDeleteThe puppets weird but the record looks great.
ReplyDeleteMy thoughts are about the same as everyone else, the movement of the record is down but the movement of the figure is a bit off and could use a little work.
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